return2ozma@lemmy.world to News@lemmy.world · 1 year agoFormer Rep. Katie Porter launches run for California governorwww.nbcnews.comexternal-linkmessage-square96linkfedilinkarrow-up1499arrow-down15cross-posted to: [email protected]
arrow-up1494arrow-down1external-linkFormer Rep. Katie Porter launches run for California governorwww.nbcnews.comreturn2ozma@lemmy.world to News@lemmy.world · 1 year agomessage-square96linkfedilinkcross-posted to: [email protected]
minus-squareNauticalNoodle@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down1·1 year agohmmm, seems clunky. I’m not sure that will work as a very good slogan. Do you have a shorter way of saying it without miscommunicating your overall message?
minus-squareAWistfulNihilist@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·1 year agoJust take the last sentence, people will fill in the rest with their own grievances with him. Maybe his hair cut, always looks like he swam there.
hmmm, seems clunky. I’m not sure that will work as a very good slogan.
Do you have a shorter way of saying it without miscommunicating your overall message?
Just take the last sentence, people will fill in the rest with their own grievances with him. Maybe his hair cut, always looks like he swam there.