ickplant@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 11 个月前Hello therelemmy.worldimagemessage-square14linkfedilinkarrow-up1466arrow-down12
arrow-up1464arrow-down1imageHello therelemmy.worldickplant@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 11 个月前message-square14linkfedilink
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up12arrow-down2·edit-211 个月前It doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second verse line. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHA
minus-squareAngryCommieKender@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·11 个月前Second line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·11 个月前I was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction
minus-squareZwiebel@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·11 个月前You can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up6·11 个月前Yeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”
It doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second
verseline. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHASecond line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.
I was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction
You can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”
Yeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”